It has been raining in Quincy for so many days. The weather reminds me of the days in 1993 when the levy was breached and the town was flooded. This time, the rains come in spurts, heavy deluge that makes you stop and take a look at the world outside; and at other times, it is soft continuous pitter patter and the heart sings to the tune of these drops falling on the broad leaves of the trees, mixed with the rumble of soft thunder.
I shut the engine of my car on the way home,
roll up the windows and listen to the rhythm
and music of the rain on the roof of the car,
while my heart sang with the rain.
I close my eyes, and see me seventy years earlier
running out of the house, bare feet, hair flying
around my face, and with arms stretched
sticking my tongue out, so I could taste rain;
The drops of rain roll down along the windows
and the intense desire takes over— I want
to touch this rain; I want the hair to get drenched again.
I open the door and get out; the rain drops bathe my face;
they take my breath away.
I stand there, and realize that there are tears in my eyes.
I pretend to wipe the wind-shield, and see a squad car pull up behind
An officer gets out of his patrol car, all dressed up in rain gear,
“Is there a problem doctor? Do you need a ride home?”
I look at his rain clothes, and say, “No thank you! I had to get out of the car,
just so I could once again feel the rain, like I did when I was at home
Seven decades ago!!”©
Zakiah Sayeed.
Beautiful. I think the rain drops were a lot colder than the rain you felt seven decades ago.
It’s possible that the rain was warmer there, but the rain in summer here, is not too different either. The point was that I wanted to feel it on my upturned face!
Lovely. I love the rain too but I think it’s often the memories that touch us the most.
Of course it is the memories! The nostalgia kills me sometimes Elizabeth. hope every thing is A Okay around you and yours!
Excellent. It reminds me of an occasion 50 years ago when my brother and I ran around the neighborhood in a rainstorm, stomping through the creek that formed along the curb.
Yup, been there done that too, Tim! And what was funny and poignant for me was when I saw my children do the same with the puddles around the home, and something always caught in the cords of my heart, and I would remember my own joy at those puddles and small creeks. now my grandchildren do that,. ❤ ❤
I love this, Zakiah — I can relate to this — questioned by a cop for pretending to be a kid again! Didn’t it make you feel good to be able to say you were fine — just enjoying the rain?! Love and hugs!
Wasn’t that funny Janet. Small town means everyone knows what you do and how you are!! I am glad I didn’t have any other explanation to offer. The local news paper would have had to place a new paragraph about me otherwise. Ha ha!
Zakiah, You captured and presented the sentiment beautifully. I can feel what you felt. 🙂
Thank you Lynn. Weathers loaded with rain, thunder and lightning make my heart melt. I am sure you have memories like that too.
I am so glad a purple star welcomed you home to NC. Still cannot find the comment box on your page.
Been rainy in Northwest Kansas also
Ok, now we haven’t had rain for three days now. I need to water my flowering plants. They are beginning to look sad.
We had a couple day break than got 4 plus inches
This is so beautiful and made me laugh! I have danced and run and twirled in the rain….just to feel the refreshing raindrops…to feel like a kid again! 🙂 And I often take walks in the rain. Coop doesn’t like to, so I go by myself. 🙂
Listening to the rain fall on different surfaces and play different notes/songs is such a lovely part of life!
Wonderful poem!
HUGS!!! 🙂
PS…I would have asked the officer to dance with me in the rain! 😉
I wish now I had done that! Asked the officer to dance with me in the rain!! That would have been a hoot!
I love to walk in the rain. Used to do that in India when I was in med school. My room mate one year, (MAYA), and I would take long walks and come home drenched to the bone and walk through the Mess Hall. Scandalous!!
❤ ❤ ❤
I know this strange music of the rain falling on the roof . This is so attractive . I share entirely what you say in this poem , Zakiah . Besides here we have the drought so rain would be a blessing.
Love ❤
Michel
I am sorry you are having drought there Michel.
I thought that you might feel one with this poem about rain. So glad you liked it. Thank you.
Love,
Zakiah.
not many able to embrace nature the way you do, and has stories to tell. such memory will forever be cherished, and only you know how wonderful it must feel. yet your words able to share that joyous moment, such that make us all feel grateful for your poetic contribution.